In class everyone wrote an 100 word story(It has to be exactly 100 words). It was hard to write exactly 100 words. I hope you like it.
Maddi just got a giraffe called Bambi. She loved her so much, one day she forgot to feed Bambi. Bambi was so hungry she ran away. Suddenly Bambi was lost. Suddenly she remembered this place and she started to think where she was. Then she remembered. “This is the wild,” she said. She saw a pile of leaves she loves jumping in. Thud Bambi fell in a hole. Three men came and said “you're coming with us” Then a truck came and took Bambi. Maddi was so worried she found footprints that looked like Bambi's. She followed and found Bambi.
Have you written a 100 word story.
Kia ora Jasmine my name is Iola.I really like how you lots of words to make your work amazing.Maybe you could used more interesting words to make your work more interesting.
ReplyDeleteCool story, Jasmine. I hope Bambi is okay. Did you find it difficult to tell a story in 100 words? Ahiahi marie.
ReplyDeleteHi Mr G,
DeleteI found it a bit difficult writing an 100 word story.